[原创]鹧鸪天—雨后垂钓

倘若

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;<p></p></font></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">雨后蜻蜓千点红，</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-fareast-font-family: 隶书; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">几多竟落老梧桐。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-fareast-font-family: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">闲来无事邀渔友，</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-fareast-font-family: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">水畔逍遥做钓翁。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;"> </span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-fareast-font-family: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">荷挚露，</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-fareast-font-family: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">柳随风，</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-fareast-font-family: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">两三白鸟入芦丛。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-fareast-font-family: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">炊烟渐起尤贪晚，</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-fareast-font-family: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;">谈笑归途月影中。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-fareast-font-family: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-font-family: 隶书;"><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;<p></p></font></span></p><p></p>

[此贴子已经被作者于2006-9-9 12:53:21编辑过]

虎头虎脑

好文章，顶

忆江南

好一个<span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: arial;">谈笑归途月影中</span>

都市游鱼

<p>很工整的一首词!</p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: arial;">雨后蜻蜓<font color="#0000ff">点</font>点红，</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: arial; mso-fareast-font-family: 隶书; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"> <p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: arial;">几多竟落老梧桐。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: arial; mso-fareast-font-family: 隶书;"> <p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: arial;">闲来无事<font color="#0033ff">唤</font>渔友，</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: arial; mso-fareast-font-family: 隶书;"> <p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-bidi-font-family:arial;;">水畔逍遥做钓翁。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: arial;"> </span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: arial; mso-fareast-font-family: 隶书;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: arial;">荷挚露，</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: arial; mso-fareast-font-family: 隶书;"> <p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: arial;">柳随风，</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: arial; mso-fareast-font-family: 隶书;"> <p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: arial;">两三白鸟入<font color="#3300ff">苇</font>丛。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: arial; mso-fareast-font-family: 隶书;"> <p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: arial;">炊烟渐起尤贪晚，</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: arial; mso-fareast-font-family: 隶书;"> <p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 隶书; mso-bidi-font-family: arial;">谈笑归途月<font color="#3809f7">斜</font>中。</span></p>

倘若

<p>谢谢几位朋友!</p>

ufo2000000

推敲的有理。好诗，已入境！！

wheal

好词！